I say almost because I've asked for a couple of revisions, but no biggie. He couldn't understand why she was crying. It sums up everything that was said and may demonstrate briefly how the point was proven. The paragraph only makes up one of many paragraphs in an essay, and are more mechanical in nature including the introduction and conclusion. Students did all drafting directly in Google Docs and once the paragraph draft was completed, the draft could be shared with me for virtual feedback. } I desperately wanted to reward and recognize process and progress for all students, not just those who finished all the pieces of our project. We will learn about the 4 different parts of a Schaffer paragraph.
Example: If one searches for poetry, poetry will emerge. This is called a one-chunk body paragraph and is the most basic Schaffer model. This sentence contains analysis, interpretation, character feelings, opinions, inference, insight, reasons, or color commentator. Students may be at risk for getting sick if they eat the questionable food on the menu. Head-Gordon, M-M Poo, and D. Schaffer co-corresponding author , and H. Why did the author use those facts at that particular point in the text? Students became risk-takers in all the best ways.
Likewise, a good conclusion sentence should also be a connecting one; therefore it will sufficiently prepare the reader for the next topic sentence that is to come. The procedure also goes by the name Wirtz-Conklin method, referring to two bacteriologists during the 1900s. The paragraph then ends with a concluding sentence. Selected as the Cover Article. To find poems takes time. Students also bring their own knowledge of life and universal truths to bear on the situation.
Students learn to think deductively; as I often tell them, they are like Sherlock Holmes walking onto a crime scene. The biggest reward for me was this: relationships, which led to community. This work includes mechanistic investigation of stem cell control, as well as molecular evolution and engineering of viral gene delivery vehicles. Concrete Detail The concrete detail that is provided after the topic sentence is simply a statement that supports what was previously mentioned. We are interested in the related areas of stem cell bioengineering, gene delivery systems, and molecular virology, with applications in regenerative medicine and tissue engineering.
In addition to the instructional videos on demand, I did provide students hard copies of each instructional handout—I learned quickly last fall that most of my students needed a hard copy of any handout because that fits their current learning style. Quotations, citations and other reputable sources are often encouraged. We devoted about a week of class time to researching and taking notes; this in-class work time was important because students could ask for help with their research or EasyBib in person as needed. As you can see, there is a good deal of frontloading between writing the introduction and writing the two body paragraphs, but I wanted the students to have a solid foundation before they attempted to compose the body paragraphs. We will learn to use evidence and reasoning to help argue our opinions. Slide 3 Valentine for Ernest Mann You can't order a poem like you order a taco.
Werner 2016 Regeneration to Transform Medicine. I am thankful for this last year that has given me glimpses of what could be for me and my students; I am forever thankful for my War Eagle Writers at Chestatee Academy and my principal, Jennifer Kogod, who gave me freedom to try and innovate in our writing studio. Schaffer David Schaffer is a Professor of Chemical and Biomolecular Engineering, Bioengineering, and Neuroscience at University of California, Berkeley, where he also serves as the Director of the. A Schaffer paragraph also has other guidelines a writer must follow. One of the most formidable obstacles to gene therapy is how to efficiently deliver genes to a sufficient number of cells to yield a therapeutic effect.
Furthermore, while this type of paragraph is usually only five sentences, on rare occasions they may contain more as long as the additional sentences are one more concrete detail and two additional commentary sentences. Schaffer corresponding author , and A. The instructions are plain and simple and hard to misinterpret. For instance, for a concrete detail you may choose to provide. Maybe if we re-invent whatever our lives give us we find poems. Schaffer co-corresponding author , and K. Example 1: For example, she does all the cooking, cleaning, and sewing.
Relate the theme to all of us. More than ever before, I knew them and they truly knew me. We have efforts in novel signal discovery, computational and experimental analysis of the biological networks that cells use to interpret and implement these signals, and on the integration of these signals into biomaterial microenvironments for optimal stem cell control. Schaffer co-corresponding author , and J. Dogs make great pets because they are playful. Commentary is your analysis of that concrete detail.